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| Heal
Naruto
GaaLee...or LeeGaa. Something like that.
PG-13 for language and shonen ai.
Hypothetical scene in the Naruto timeline since the manga chapters concerning Gaara's outcome haven't come out yet, but I went ahead with it anyway. Pretending the Akatsuki was successful and Gaara's reaction to being...not exactly him. With Lee-cheerfulness in mass-production. Kind of happy, kind of angsty. Spoilers for season 2 manga chapters.
![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif) ew_younerd gave me bunny. Bunny grew up. This is what happens, when you give me bunnies 0o Bunny!
Heal
***
He woke.
The pain was expected--the lack of blood in the air was not. The weakness in his body was not. The emptiness, a whole new kind of emptiness that didn't stem from his chest, hiding between the slats of his ribcage, but the emptiness roaring in sorrow from inside his skull, was definitely unexpected.
His eyes opened, painfully.
"Thank god you're alive..." Temari sounded hoarse, yet curiously composed. Gaara tried to focus on her, but even her voice was blurry, ragged.
Why wouldn't I be alive?
What does God have to do with anything?
Temari smiled awkwardly, and it was clear from the way her lips moved that she wasn't used to smiling when she wasn't happy--she still tried. She reached awkwardly--because this was unusual for them all--and lightly crossed her fingers over Gaara's lying on the sheet. Not the whole hand of course--she didn't hold his hand, they weren't familiar enough with each other for that, had never been physically affectionate, but she tried anyway.
She inhaled deeply, smiled a little more successfully, and asked if he needed anything. How he felt, if he wanted anything done.
Gaara wanted to know what had happened.
"I had a feeling you'd say that," Temari said with another grim, unaccustomed smile. "It's..."
He'd hated the monster, of course--he hated the monster for haunting his dreams, for killing indiscriminately, for never being under his control, but he'd adapted to it, in the same way people adapt living in a war or with a lethal disease--it was there. Nothing was going to make it go away. He had gotten used to it, and had been learning to grow away from it, to grow apart from it.
Now, he wasn't sure what was supposed to happen. Temari had smiled at him warmly, a genuine smile, and said, "Don't worry about it. You'll keep your title, and I promise you--we're going to make them pay. Don't worry about it--it'll be all right."
Kankuro had said much the same thing, looking a little better than Gaara felt, but not much. He felt...he wasn't used to feeling pain. He wasn't used to feeling anything externally--he'd always been untouchable. Always.
"You're going to keep your title," Temari said. It was the third time he'd heard that phrase.
"But...you're probably going to have to get some extra training in though...it shouldn't be too different from what you've been doing lately anyway, it'll just have to be a bit...harder." Kankuro shrugged apologetically, then grinned. "We'll still do it though."
It was hard. It was hard, and it was made harder by how much he just wanted to sleep. He could sleep now--it was all his body wanted to do, and it was as uncontrollable as the demon had been--worse even. The demon at least could be placated, ignored, or shut off, but this...
His body didn't want to do anything but sleep--not eat, not drink, nothing. It just wanted to lay still and sleep and it was more unmanageable than anything Gaara had ever come across. Training his body to stay awake was harder than training it to get stronger, training it to be more reliant on his own power instead of the free-flowing demon energy.
He was just...tired. All the time. Every time. Any time he tried to do anything harder than opening his eyes and sitting up on whatever he'd fallen asleep on, he was tired.
And there were things he couldn't tell his family--that he couldn't even tell Naruto.
That creature did not make me who I am. He did not define me. He was not what made me Me.
But he was what made me terrifying.
I don't think I can be that terrifying on my own. The villagers will only be grateful to me for so long, lenient, before their desire for a leader who can stay awake longer than five hours overcomes their gratitude.
Gaara had never really felt guilty about killing people. He'd regretted his recklessness, his futile ability to control his own impulses and his demon's urges, but people died; it was a way of life. People always died--it was what made them people. Fighting was about putting one's life on the line to make something happen--death was a natural by-product. He saw no reason to feel guilty, though he did feel responsible. Mercy was something he was learning with effort because it seemed more prudential than bland cruelty. It made a little sense--it just didn't make much.
"Need help?"
"Why?"
Lee had frowned, genuinely puzzled why someone would ask why they needed help when they obviously did need help.
Gaara was leaning against the bathroom wall in the Sunakagure main office complex, eyes blackened as if someone had taken a lead hammer and meticulously beat every inch of skin surrounding his eyes--instead of healing, the rapid departure of the demon's energy had caused his body to weaken even further. He'd been running cold water over his hands and face earlier, not caring that it was a waste, only trying to get rid of the constant prickling feeling on his skin the air caused, trying to get rid of the damn heat he'd never noticed before.
He was not having a good day.
He could barely carry his own weight, he couldn't smell blood with the accuracy he once had, couldn't smell people with the same accuracy he once had, couldn't even sense energy with even minimal accuracy.
Gaara had always wondered, distantly, what it was like to be human. So far, he hated it. He would have been furious, if he wasn't so tired all the time.
"Well..." Lee gave him a blank look usually reserved for drooling maniacs and drunks table-dancing topless and without rhythm or talent. "It'd make things easier..."
Gaara tried glaring at him--that usually worked. He tried ignoring him. That didn't work either. Lee grinned.
"You know what you need? You need iron in your blood and then you'll be back to tip-top shape! Vitamins!"
He'd never been manhandled before--then again, he'd never been able to sleep until now. And he'd never wanted to kill anyone so happy and loud, so very gratingly cheerful and not been able to do it. Until now. He couldn't do anything, now.
"--plenty of sleep! A wholesome breakfast vitalizes the body and prepares the mind for a grueling day of--"
Gaara found himself dragged away. He found himself wanting to kill everyone in the general vicinity, everyone staring at him, or perhaps simply just Lee. Definitely Lee, one way or the other. He found himself, for possibly the first time in his life, embarrassed. And getting angry about it. And being quite not so tired. His body was still in no condition to actually do anything remotely resembling revenge, but he wanted to. Wanting to do something was an improvement.
Temari watched blankly as he was dragged inside the house, coffee cup frozen on the way to her mouth.
"Good morning Temari-san! I found the Kazekage-sama a bit tired so I brought him back to get some good well-deserved rest, all right? I'll be back down in a minute so don't worry a bit!"
From down the hall, the remains of Lee's cheerful tirade against malnutrition and lack of proper rest rambled on and on in a happily determined tone that proclaimed gladly that it could go on like this all day without a hitch. It was a voice used to running marathons of the spirit, used to using cheerfulness and determination as an awful kind of martial art.
Slowly, Temari put her coffee cup down. Below the kitchen counter and out of sight, Kankuro was still frozen in the act of rummaging the lower shelves of food, though he'd watch Gaara be shoved/carried down the hall.
"Do think this means war?" Temari asked carefully.
"Dunno. Why is it Konoha always sends us their dorks?"
"Psychological warfare?"
Kankuro considered this, finally selecting a packet of dried fruit that had been hiding in the stuffy shadows and gathering dust. "Damn. Those bastards are clever."
"Do you think we should save him?"
"Do you want to?" Kankuro looked at his older sister sideways, mouth half-occupied with chewing.
By the sound of things, Lee had finished up with putting Gaara to bed. Temari's mind did an automatic rewind on the sound of that sentence, not quite able to impose a comfy quaint setting on anything pertaining to Gaara, then made a more pressing urge to get out of there, because it sounded like Lee was coming back for food. And vitamins. And probably herbal tea with plenty of nourishing milk in it. She glanced at Kankuro.
"...It's not like he'll hurt him or anything, and Gaara won't really listen to us... But we could save him. If it was a good idea..."
"There's no one taking care of the office, with him here," Kankuro pointed out.
Several minutes later outside, sharing the snacks thoughtfully as they strolled through as much shade as could be scraped up at that time of morning, Kankuro said, "Well, at least he'll get better faster this way."
"Kill or cure, huh?"
"The best way," Kankuro grinned.
***
Gaara would have opted for 'kill'.
Cure wasn't worth this--cure wasn't the answer, because while it was true violence didn't solve everything it did solve a lot of things and it would've solved Lee's non-stop gentle/cheerful/aggressive critique on his health care on the spot. It wasn't that Sunagakure didn't have good doctors, but more that when Gaara said "No," it generally wasn't objected to, out of habit. Lee, however, didn't appear to hear or care very much--he had his own personal mission, and everything else became background until it was completed.
To his credit in a completely human body, Gaara wasn't blushing. His expression hadn't changed beyond stony and distant, though his eyes were sharper than normal. He'd been tucked in to bed and was struggling out of the sheets that felt heavy as lead because even though he was human now, that did not make not-him. He wasn’t weak—not yet. He was still him.
He'd almost gotten his feet on the floor (even his sandals had been stolen) when Lee strode into the room armed with a couple of bottles in the crook of his arm and a bowl of something steaming.
He'd never relied on weapons before--Gaara looked for one now.
Lee put the items on the bedside table, and stood back to look at him, hands on his hips. Gaara glared, body stiff and skinny, looking ready to spring at any second. His skin looked ashen, hair messy and eyes for once too big with his face, made all the worse for the bruise marks around them.
The first time he’d seen Gaara, the first time he’d fought Gaara, it’d been like fighting a monster. There was an intelligence behind the eyes; malice and ruthlessness, but there hadn’t been compassion or even something approaching empathy. Even Gaara had seen himself as a monster, as a separate species from humanity, and as much as he’d hated himself for being that way he’d never tried to change it until Naruto came and did something to him.
Even now, after years of domestication, the single-minded intensity and ruthlessness was still there in his eyes—would probably always be there. There would always be something in Gaara that was monstrous, that was vaguely inhuman and uncivilized. But it was something he’d learn to control—to control the demon—and now he didn’t have the benefits that work had gained. Now Lee started to notice the things he’d noticed before but hadn’t believed—that Gaara was still shorter than him, had lost some of his musculature though there were still traces here and there, and that he was young; still a kid. Without the power, Gaara was just a kid who’d lived for years as a monster. And now he looked a little…well, afraid. Nervous, at least. On guard, definitely. He’d never been defenseless before…
He held back the impulse to hug him—Lee had always been open to his emotions and physically open and affection, but…now wasn’t the time. It wouldn’t be appreciated; would do more harm than good.
Lee’s arms fell into a slightly less authoritive stance, his shoulders sloping down, and he lowered his voice.
"To get your old strength back, you have to let yourself heal. It's a gamble, but it's the only one that works. You just have to trust your body and fate--it's not easy, but it's the only way. I'm sorry. I know how you feel."
"How would you know?"
Lee smiled awkwardly, "Because you put me through it. When you broke me. And now I'm stronger than I was for it."
Gaara didn't have anything to say. He hadn't forgotten about it--about nearly killing Lee, about nearly destroying his body beyond repair--but he thought Lee had. Or had forgiven him and forgotten it, or something. Lee not only looked like an idiot, he acted like one most of the time too.
Like the other murders, he didn't feel guilty about hurting Lee--it had been a fight. It had been only a fight.
"You'll be stronger too, when you come out of this."
Gaara blinked.
"Eat up," Lee continued. "I'll be down the hall if you need me. I think your siblings went to take care of things." Lee hesitated, once, then moved forward and gently squeezed his upper arm with another lopsided smile. "You've gotta take care of yourself, before you can take care of others."
The door shut gently, and Gaara eyed the soup suspiciously. He stayed still for several seconds, than scratched and rubbed irritably at the shoulder Lee had touched. The warm sensation wouldn't leave--the feathery/queasy feeling. It was hard to ignore; Lee was hard to ignore, even when he wasn't even in the room.
Gaara poked the food. He eyed the bottles. He lay back down and closed his eyes.
Being human was hard. It was confusing. It wasn't all bad, which made the experience even worse. And he had no idea how to beat it or even how to start. And he didn't want to ask for something so inane...
You'll be stronger too.
Gaara frowned, and then opened his eyes again. He got through half the food and managed to down one of the iron pills, before admitting temporary defeat and going back to sleep.
You'll be stronger too. | comments: Leave a comment     |
| LeeGaa is good--it is INCREDIBLY good. I was hoping for sweetness ^^ Sweetness is GOOD, and I can't wait until the new chapters come out so we can find out what really happens to Gaara...we need to know! We need to know muchly!
And I've written a bit more of GaaLee, mostly This bit, which I enjoyed much AND it's a lot longer than this one! And it has a real ending! And everything!
Glad you liked! ^_^ | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
| | Oh, wow! Do you remember the name of the artist who drew your icon? I've been looking for that picture for a looooooong time now (saw it once, bookmarked the page at DA, then lost all my bookmarks and could never find it again =_=). | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
| Sweet!
But don't you dare to abandon GaaNaru!!!! | | (Reply) (Thread) |
| Yee! I had fun with it ^_^
But I've never shipped any pairing...not even NaruGaa or GaaNaru, however you want it. I just...never have 0o My attention span isn't that long... | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
| FffffjsdlgkjsdsgGUH! WOMAAANNN WHY DO YOU ROCK SO HARRRD.
Lee is so good for Gaara. ;_; Your Lee is WONDERFUL. Also, I really enjoy the way you write Temari and Kankuro~ Love for the siblings!
And your Gaara is HARDCORE. It's so poignant, the way "You'll be stronger too" echoes in his mind... and the overall concept is smashing as usual, Gaara's overexhaustion I mean. For such a short piece, this really hits his character hard. You balance his strengths with possible (inevitable?) weaknesses, and make him vulnerable without undercutting his strengths and/or lack of... morals. Morals isn't the right word. Whatever the word is for not being guilty for being So Hardcore And Scary, Rest Demon!Gaara's Soul If This Is The End. ;_;
I marvel at you. :O ONE THING THOUGH. Kazekage! XD
...This is three chapters now. WHEN WILL THE RAPING STOP?! | | (Reply) (Thread) |
| *falls down from hard-rocking and attack of capitals*
Most of the time I can't write Lee, but the times I can, I absolutely love him--he's hard for me to write, but I do love him. I'm trying to write Kankuro as more responsible than I always pictured him (I kinda liked him irresponsible, but he isn't in the manga so I can't...) and Temari as softer with REVENGE.
Gaara...yeah.
I love the demon. I adore his power. I worship his power, and I think they're going to jack all that, so I'm just trying to...figure out how he'd deal with it. He wouldn't fall to pieces--he'd get angry if he wasn't falling asleep all the time, I think. He'd try to pretend nothing had really changed even while he was falling to bits because that's all he'd ever known...
And I don't care what Kishi says, Gaara's NOT moral! He's not! Never! Damn Kishi'll probably give him a moral code or some icky junk like that But I'll NEVER BUY IT.
Gaara has codes. Not morals, codes. Ways to do things. But NOT MORALS! NEVER! He's no one's boy scout, damn it!
...I actually didn't pick up on the Kazekage/hokage thingy until you pointed it out 0o Wow. And I revised the thing like four times. Wow 0o
My brain's dead. All fixed now though--thank you!
I hope the Akatsuki get crushed by a rock...a rock damnit! I don't even like them! | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
| Brilliance! Wonderful! Laughing so hard! Exclamation marks!
This is really good. It really feels like Lee: the way he's funny and most of his screen time is amusing but then there's just these bits of seriousness and it ends up being really serious or sad or inspiring. I love it. A lot.
Plus the idea of Lee lecturing Gaara about Vitamins! and Proper Rest! and tucking him in is very funny. And Kankuro and Temari are awesome too. | | (Reply) (Thread) |
| Exclamation marks are good! Use the exclamation marks! Mark!
I adore Lee and I have so much problem writing him--for all the reasons you mentioned, I think. He does so much; he's funny and serious and sometimes angsty and whinny and then inspiring and understanding and...he does a lot. With a bad hair cut. But he does a lot--he's really complex.
This piece totally needed humor (Gaara losing the demon's pretty depressing). The Sands are excellent, but they need sugar and humor and Lee provides that so naturally that it's perfect. Glad you liked! | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
| (mouth agape)
I....no way...thank you....soo....much.....what do you want? Just tell me!! Art?? That's all I can give!!! I'll do anything!!! LeeGaa, GaaNaru....ermm.....seriously...ANYTHING. I loved it. It was so subtle and sweet and....thank you so much!! How can you write Lee so well? Even in my humour fics I find him hard to work with!!!
Kankuro and Temari were written very well too. You know...Lee is a dork. That is the perfect word for him. We all love him for it. I LOVE that you know how to write Gaa/Lee. It's so damn hard...because unlike naruto and gaara, who'd probably be tearing each other up with sinful and dirty acts right away, Lee and Gaara would take a LONG time to happen....hell, the reason I like it is because I think it would mostly be a thing that both of them kind of know but never really do anything about it.
I love you. So. Much. You beautiful creature, you. | | (Reply) (Thread) |
| I want food. I'm a starving artist...we always need food. Or more bunnies...bunnies are good too XDDD I like art though--I like crack art. Can I order random crack art? Bonus points for FMA crack art? I need more crack in my life...I do. And you do crack incredibly well--insanely well, and I can't. So...yeah. I want crack :D
Lee's hard to write. I'd write him more, but he's bloody hard to write--Gaara's easier. Gaara's a lot easier for me, I just have to watch I don't make him too soft or too bloodthirsty, and it's all good from there.
But that's partly what I love about LeeGaa too; even if they never ever kiss or anything, there's still affection there, something like love, and it would be (god, this is going to sound stupid) it would be pure. Not just because Lee's a naturally good guy or anything, but because it wouldn't be based on how the other guy looks (because neither of them are much to look at, not Sasuke-esque look at) but by how the other guy is. Which is also bloody hard to do, but worth it. Just bloody hard.
Lee's a strange mix of Armstrong and Ishida and LEE and Carrot and Aziraphale and...strange. A strange, strange mix. I read a long time ago that Lee had one of the worst character designs ever (how he was drawn) but his personality was...very well done, I think, because it's not innocent. It's always done INNOCENT and pure and whatever, and his Role usually never gets hit TOO hard, like Gaara did to him, but...yeah. Lee's not innocent, and he's not a complete idiot, so he's...yeah.
I need more sleep 00 | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
| | Lee Gaara!!! I adore you for making it work so well. There are so little fics with those two in them. | | (Reply) (Thread) |
| | There really aren't that many fics with them; if you want, I have one other fic Here with them that's a lot more complete than this one is, and it's a bit more conclusive too. Glad you liked! | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
doven | | Link: | (Link) | | Time: | 2005-04-19 10:17 pm (UTC) |
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| "Dunno. Why is it Konoha always sends us their dorks?"
"Psychological warfare?"
hahhahahahahaha ohman. I love that. Lee is PSYCHOLOGICAL WARFARE! always some line worth remembering...
Poor Gaara! wouldn't it be weird if it really worked out this way in the manga? You'd be precognitive then. Ummm ummm and I love your Lee! he's so sweet but with CONVICTION! Or something. yeah. I just woke up from a nap so not making much with the eloquence... XD; uuuhh shutting up now. | | (Reply) (Thread) |
| Lee's a small invasion force all on his own--and he doesn't even have to hit you to do it! Lee's scary. He's also hard to write--hard for me to write, but I kinda think he worked out here.
I have a feeling it's going to work out that way in the manga...at least from what we know right now...Kishi's been evil lately, and it's the kinda thing he'd do, just because he could 0o
I just woke up too--I've got that "OMG TOO EARLY" syndrome unable to say anything real smart...
00;;;; | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
| *There are so little fics with those two in them.*
But there is TONS of art, and to me, that's a better thing. I would hate 13 year olds on ff.net trying to take on the LEEGAARA CHALLENGE! and writing gaara sobbing into lee's shoulder and lee being some manly bishounen comforting a raped gaara or something....(shudders) ugh. That's why I stay away from most fanfics unless I really trust the author (bats eyelashes at Gelfling and blows a kiss to her), because then it ruins a couple for me. If I read sasunaru and narugaa fics from any old ff.net author, I think I'd despise those couples more than anything. Most fics between those couples are awful. People just can't write sometimes.
Only the best authors step up to the challenge of crack pairings. Seriously. | | (Reply) (Thread) |
| There's really not a lot of fics with them...and this didn't reply to that one message though. If you wanted it to 00 I don't know if you wanted it to or not, but it didn't, and I thought I'd let you know...
...Lee's not bishounen-like though. He's...manly, in a weird way, but not like, er...nah, not like that. That would be...wrong. That would be very wrong. My thoughts descriping a raped Gaara are unprintable, and better left in the dark. It was actually the excess SasuNaru NOT WELL WRITTEN that killed that pairing for me, and the NaruGaa ICKY started to until I forced myself into FMA and found better stuff to read. And that's why I can write Naruto without feeling like I'm mimicking a pre-newbie icky with...yeah ^_^;;;;
I love you though--I make squeaky-chipmunk noise of joy.
:D | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
| MWAHAHAHAHAHA that was BRILLIANT!! With British accent on it!!! YESHHH
It was sweet and funny and it made me laugh a couple of times ^___^
There was an intelligence behind the eyes; malice and ruthlessness, but there hadn’t been compassion or even something approaching empathy. Even Gaara had seen himself as a monster, as a separate species from humanity, and as much as he’d hated himself for being that way he’d never tried to change it until Naruto came and did something to him.
This is the best description of Gaara I have ever read... *LOVESUPONYOU* Perfectlicious... great job as always, Queen!!!
*gives you Squeeshie*
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| Mmmm...funny is good, funny is incredibly good: it's hard for me to do funny, so I try at it. British accents own me--they seriously do, I love that accent.
I've done Gaara so much...^^;;;; Gaara's good, Gaara's always good. | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
| OMG R U SURE YOU DON'T WANT ME TO DRAW A FANART FOR THIS FIC!?!? IT'S SO CUTE!!
Ok. Enough fangirling.
That was adorable! I loved how Gaara was defenseless and how Lee was trying to help bring Gaara's health back up -^^- Especially the quote about needing to help yourself before helping others.
I love the little part with Temari and Kankurou and the pyschological warfare part! GOD I LOVE YOU! *hug kiss glomp hump* | | (Reply) (Thread) |
| Sweetheart, you can draw whatever you want ^_^ It's all good to me, I'm cool with everything right now and extremely tired so I make very little sense.
Lee is very karmic. Lee's incredibly karmic--extremely karmic, is Lee. And compassionate. He compliments Gaara's personality nicely, it's just that he's hard to write that I don't do him much...
THE WORLD NEEDS HUMOR!
*loves you too...curls up on and goes to sleep* | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
| AWwwww, this was cute! :3 I liked the bit about the vitamins. Lee's going to make a good mommy some day. XP
Also, I didn't comment on your last Sannin-entries, but I really liked the one with Tsunade grieving over her brother and Mr. Plot Device. All three were bang-on, I think, especially Orochimaru and his almost-yet-not-quite passive silence. As someone who hates the snake-bastard, I find the younger version of him almost endearing. Almost.
BUT ... Lee rawks. And he needs an apron and a Cosmo magazine. | | (Reply) (Thread) |
| Lee's going to be a good mommy or doctor--it's funny, but whatever Lee does, he'll almost certainly be good at it. Just because...he'll try that hard. And be a dork. A dork trying hard. But yeah. Lee's extremely cool in a dorky way.
I dislike Orochimaru-elder a lot; a whole lot. Which is probably why I wanted to write him younger...because he wasn't born evil, it just happened, so...yeah. I guess. ...My explanation has no point. | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
| | This is damn kickass! You've got the knack for the sentimental. Tis awesome. | | (Reply) (Thread) |
| Muchas gracias!
I had fun with it...it kind of wrote itself, it was very nice to do. I like GaaLee too, it's just hard to write most of the time, because Lee's hard to write. | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
| *dead silence*
You made me like... LeeGaa... my most unliked pairing EVER.
You are a MASTER of the slash. | | (Reply) (Thread) |
| *purrs happily*
LeeGaa...is fun. It's hard to write and isn't written very much, but it's fun. I've done a second one Here if you're interested and you're ready to try something strange and weird--but THANK YOU!
That's so sweet...I'm going to hang that on my wall, that's so sweet *sniffs* | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
| Psychological warfare.
*snerk*
That was exactly what I was thinking all the way through this, especially when Lee mentioned how Gaara broke him (OH THE HIDDEN ANGST), it seemed like the cruel and unusual form of revenge has finally set upon Gaara at last.
Next. Spandex. It breathes easier in the desert! Lee could probably get it in some kind of deserty yellow. They could be clothing buddies.
*chokes at the mental image* | | (Reply) (Thread) |
| It's karmic--it's very very karmic. Lee makes an excellent secret weapon though, even when he's not fighting, he's EVIL and happy and loud. Well...he's not really evil though, mostly he's just happy and loud 0_o
Lee could probably get it in some kind of deserty yellow. They could be clothing buddies.
*head explodes* | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
| | I cannot say enough how much I love your Lee/Gaara fics. It's all you fault that I'm as addicted to this pairing as I am. | | (Reply) (Thread) |
| Your icon ROCKS so hard...that's a beautiful icon, so much LOVE.
I love writing LeeGaa, it's so much fun and cuteness and da FUNNY--they're wonderful together, no matter how they get thrown.
You're an addict! Whee! It's a good pairing; it really is. | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
| A friend of mine on DA linked to this, so that's why I'm here. But you probably are used to random commenters.!
"It was a voice used to running marathons of the spirit, used to using cheerfulness and determination as an awful kind of martial art"
I love that line. I love the way you portrayed everyone. The story was so sweet and cute. I like how you had Gaara deal with everything--the way he was angry/tired rather than whiny and overly vulnerable.
This was excellent! Most definitely A+ material! ^^; | | (Reply) (Thread) |
| Eee!! Link! Linkage! Sweet! Ooh...could you send me the link? It'd be sweet if you could send me the link--the fic just came out, it's brand new...and there's already LINKS for it? Wow...cool :DDD
I adore Lee; he's so much fun and so terribly cute, I simply love him. Gaara's slightly easier for me to write though, he's so very delicious and scrumptious, and they interact so well together, so very very well! They balance each other out. Thanks! | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
| | wow... you should post this on ff.net.... its awsome!!! yay!! *confetti* | | (Reply) (Thread) |
| | I probably SHOULD; I haven't posted to ff.net in FOREVER, but I did like how this came out. It was..cute ^_^ And funny. | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
| YEAH! another one! i read a comment abut gaara/naruto! EH! no no! GAARA AND LEE!!!!!!!!!!! they are so CUTE!!! naruto and sasuke are cute! and so therefor...gaara belongs to LEE !! YEAH!!! i love when gaara saves LEE
ohh! write more gaara/lee stories PLLLEASSE!!! i would give you money and okonomiyaki only...i dont have $ and i dont know how to make okonomiyaki (which is good by the way)
SO YEAH! keep up the good work! | | (Reply) (Thread) |
| Yeah ^_^
Lee and Gaara go really cute together, but I haven't been able to write them together for a while 0o It's horrible! | | (Reply) (Parent) (Thread) |
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Got Milk? - Naruto fic: Heal :LeeGaa
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